by: © JULIE
I think you did a good job.
Composition is good but I would not have cut off part of the head and maybe composed for a vertical rather than a horizontal
Use of camera,
The use of the camera is good there is really no exposure info in the description.
If you are using a speed of 1200 I am assuming that it indicates the ISO speed which is really too high to create a proper depth of field here because you want a softness in a portrait where the eyes are the sharpest point and the rest is just a touch soft.
Focus looks very good
This is one of many I take when my daughter Kirsty can model for me... the thing with Kirsty is that she gets quite bored with it all and goes into a dream land! this how see all >
This is one of many I take when my daughter Kirsty can model for me... the thing with Kirsty is that she gets quite bored with it all and goes into a dream land! this however is good for my style of shots as they are just what I want.
Lens: Zoom: Variable focal
Exposure time: 1/1200 ,
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How to improve your photo
Try using window light to cut down on the harshness of the flash
Try composing as a vertical portrait for this particular pose or create a more casual pose for the horizontal view.
Try and have the subject turn her body a touch more to the left and have her tip her head ever so slightly toward the higher shoulder.
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