Day Dreamer
by: © JULIE
8
Overall
Rating
8
General
impression
8
Subject
of photo
8
Composition
& Perspective
8
Use of camera,
exposure
& speed
7
Depth
of field
8
Color &
Lighting
9
Focus
General
impression
I think you did a good job.
8/10
Subject
of photo
Lovely subject
8/10
Composition
& perspective
Composition is good but I would not have cut off part of the head and maybe composed for a vertical rather than a horizontal
8/10
Use of camera,
exposure
& speed
The use of the camera is good there is really no exposure info in the description.
8/10
Depth
of field
If you are using a speed of 1200 I am assuming that it indicates the ISO speed which is really too high to create a proper depth of field here because you want a softness in a portrait where the eyes are the sharpest point and the rest is just a touch soft.
7/10
Color &
Lighting
Both look good
8/10
Focus
Focus looks very good
9/10
Description
This is one of many I take when my daughter Kirsty can model for me... the thing with Kirsty is that she gets quite bored with it all and goes into a dream land! this how  see all >
This is one of many I take when my daughter Kirsty can model for me... the thing with Kirsty is that she gets quite bored with it all and goes into a dream land! this however is good for my style of shots as they are just what I want.
Technical Details

NIKON D40

Lens: Zoom: Variable focal
Exposure time: 1/1200 ,
ISO: 200
Flash: Mounted
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Mike Spiegel, CPP, Cr.Photog.
20+ Years
United States
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How to improve your photo
1.
Try using window light to cut down on the harshness of the flash
2.
Try composing as a vertical portrait for this particular pose or create a more casual pose for the horizontal view.
3.
Try and have the subject turn her body a touch more to the left and have her tip her head ever so slightly toward the higher shoulder.
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